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Lovely beginning, with an out-of-canon-character Mrs. Bennet who seems to have had an epiphany with Mr. Bennet's death. Have enjoyed all your stories and I am sure this one will be as good as the others, even without AI assistance. Please write faster.

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I agree with your thoughts on AI as a writer, as we discussed at the last WIP reading. In your excerpt, I love that Mrs. Bennet is not a cartoon, and am really looking forward to reading this. I will be on vacation soon, and have been saving the Wardrobe series to enjoy while I am lounging around. I probably won't finish completely, but I should make a decent dent. Thanks for the posting.

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Love the excerpt, I look forward to reading the novel once complete. 😊😁

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